30 Days of Sentence Writing - Day 30
Some see news of worker shortages as welcome.
Japan has so far avoided explosive outbreaks of the virus, with fewer than 12,000 deaths since the start of the pandemic, thanks in part to stringent border controls in place since last spring.
[分数] [4/5]
S01
分析
Some see news of worker shortages as welcome.
有人认为劳动力短缺是好消息。
【结构】A see B as adj.
【解析】
这个句子语法上比较简单，是一个主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语的基本句式，其中 as welcome 整体做宾语补足语。其中，as 是连词，welcome 是形容词“受欢迎的”。as 后面其实省略了主语和谓语，补足后是这样的：Some see news of worker shortages as (they are welcome).
仿写
科技话题
中文：
网络购物在今天受到了广泛欢迎，甚至很多老年人认为网络购物是很方便的。
参考译文：
Online shopping enjoys widespread popularity today, and even many eledrly people see it as convenient.
我的回答：
Many old people see online shopping which are popular nowadays as convenient.
评价：
nice
环境话题
中文：
环境恶化得如此之快，以至于有些人认为环境法是很松散的，环境法本应用来惩罚污染者的。
参考译文：
The environment has deteriorated so rapidly that some people see the environmental law that should have punished polluters as lax.
我的回答：
As the environment deteriorates, some people see environmental laws which should be used to punish polluters as lenient.
评价：
nice
文化传统话题
中文：
绝大多数人认为文化融合是值得期待的。
参考译文：
The majority of people see cultural integration as expected.The
我的回答：
Most people see cultural integration as expectable.
评价：
没问题
个人品质话题
中文：
因为很多兴趣跟学生的学业表现无关，有些家长认为培养孩子的兴趣爱好是没有必要的。
参考译文：
Since many hobbies have nothing to do with students’ academic performance,many parents see developing their children’s hobbies as unnecessary.
我的回答：
Some parents see developing children’s hobbits as unnecessary because of many hobbits are unrelevant to their courses’ scores.
评价：
- 注意霍比特人和爱好的区别
- because of + 短语 / because + 原因状语从句
S02
分析
Japan has so far avoided explosive outbreaks of the virus, with fewer than 12,000 deaths since the start of the pandemic, thanks in part to stringent border controls in place since last spring.
到目前为止，日本避免了这种病毒的激烈爆发，自疫情开始以来，死亡人数不到 1.2 万人，一定程度上是因为去年春天以来实施的严格到位的边境控制。
【结构】主干 + with 伴随状语 + thanks to 原因状语
【解析】
[主干]
Japan has so far avoided explosive outbreaks of the virus
[修饰主干的部分]
伴随状语：with fewer than 12,000 deaths since the start of the pandemic 是介宾结构做伴随状语。
原因状语：thanks in part to stringent border controls in place since last spring，其中 in place 表示 in the correct position; ready for sth 在正确位置；准备妥当；也就是我们说的“到位”。
仿写
科技话题
中文：
中国的偏远农村的学生已经可以学习来自北京顶级老师的在线课程了，他们的学费一年只需要 200 元，多亏了科技的发展和政府对实现教育公平的努力。
参考译文：
Students in remote rural areas of China can already take online courses given by top-class teachers in Beijing,with only $200 a year for their tuition, thanks to the development of technology and the government’s efforts to achieve education equality.
我的回答：
Chinese students who live in remote rural areas can learn online courses from top-class teachers in Beijing with tuition about 200 Yuan, thanks to developments of technologies and performances of governments in educational equity.
评价：
nice
环境话题
中文：
上海的空气质量在过去十年稳步上升，去年雾霾天只出现了一次，这多亏了政府的努力，政府把很多落后的、会污染空气的工厂关停了。
参考译文：
Shanghai’s air quality has improved steadily over the past decade, with only one hazy day last year,thanks to the government’s effort to shut down many outdated factories that pollute the air.
我的回答：
The steadily increasing of air quality in shanghai last decade with only a single occurence of smog, thanks to the government shud many factories which are outdated and have pollution risks.
评价：
- increase 本身可作名词。空气质量是提升了而不是增加了，建议用 improve
- thanks to 是介词短语，后跟名词 thanks to the government’s efforts to shut down many outdated factories that have pollution risks.
文化传统话题
中文：
政府在建设铁路的时候，可以避开历史文化遗址，将建设的影响降到最低，这多亏了公众对保护传统文化意识的提升。
参考译文：
The government has tried to avoid historical and cultural sites when building railroads, with the impact of construction greatly reduced, thanks to the public’s increased d awareness of preserving traditional culture.
我的回答：
The government avoid historical and cultural relics when building railways with minimal damage, thanks to the increased awareness about traditional culture protection of public.
评价：
顺序建议参考译文：the public’s increased awareness about traditional culture.
个人品质话题
中文：
有越来越多的大学毕业生选择花两年时间去偏远的农村支教，几乎不考虑这期间的收入，这多亏了年轻人对贫困地区的教育事业的关心。
参考译文：
An increasing number of university graduates have chosen to spend two years teaching in remote rural areas, with little regard for their income during that period,thanks to their concern for education in the poor area.
我的回答：
More and more graduates choose to support education in remote rural areas with regardlessness about revenues, thanks to the careness about education of young people to these areas.
评价：
- revenue 一般指收益，利润，财政收入。个人收入建议用 income
- care 本身可用作名词。