30 Days of Sentence Writing - Day 29
As rich countries loosen lockdowns, an economic concern is emerging.
However, pundits do not agree on whether stimulus handouts really lead people to shirk.
[分数] [4/5]
S01
分析
As rich countries loosen lockdowns, an economic concern is emerging.
随着发达国家放松封锁，一个经济谜团正在浮现。
【结构】as …, a concern is emerging
【解析】
[主干]
an economic puzzle is emerging.
[修饰主干的部分]
时间状语从句：As rich countries loosen lockdowns 是由 as 引导的时间状语从句。这整个句子虽然简单，但 as …, a concern is emerging 这个句型在各类英文话题写作中却非常实用，值得积累。
仿写
科技话题
中文：
随着现代人越来越依赖高科技产品，一个社会性的担忧正在浮现。
参考译文：
As modern people become increasingly dependent on high-tech products, a societal concern is emergint.
我的回答：
As high-tech products are become reliable for modern people, a socialble concern is emerging.
评价：
are becoming
环境话题
中文：
随着工业化的不断推进，一个关于环境保护的担忧正在浮现。
参考译文：
As industrialization continues to advance, a concern about environmental protection is emerging.
我的回答：
As industrialization proceeding, a environmental concern is emerging.
评价：
as 引导时间状语从句 As industrialization continues to advance/proceed
文化传统话题
中文：
随着年轻人越来越崇尚外来文化，一个关于保护传统文化传承的担忧正在浮现。
参考译文：
As young people increasingly revere foreign cultures, a concern about preserving our traditional culture is emerging.
我的回答：
As young people more interesting in foreign cultures, a concern about protecting traditional culture is emerging.
评价：
As young people become more interested in foreign cultures.
个人品质话题
中文：
随着家长和老师把主要精力放在提高学生考试分数上，一个关于学生能否适应真实世界的担忧正在浮现。
参考译文：
As parents and teachers focus primarily on improving students’ test scores, a concern about students’ ability to adapt to the real world is emerging.
我的回答：
As parents and teachers focused on bringing students’ exam scores up, a concern about whether they can get used to reality is emerging.
评价：
一般现在时即可 - focus
S02
分析
However, pundits do not agree on whether stimulus handouts really lead people to shirk.
然而，对于刺激计划是否真的会使人懒惰，专家们意见不一。
【结构】A do not agree on whether …
【解析】
pundits do not agree on …, 对于 … 专家们意见不一
宾语从句 whether stimulus handouts really lead people to shirk，作 agree on 的宾语，lead people to do sth. 令人做某事
stimulus handouts to shirk 作宾语 people 的宾语补足语
仿写
科技话题
中文：
对于智能手机是否真的会伤害孩子的社交能力，家长们意见不一。
参考译文：
Parents do not agree on whether smartphones can really harm their children’s social skills.
我的回答：
Parents do not agree on whether smartphones really undermine children’s social ability.
评价：
nice
环境话题
中文：
对于限制汽车通行是否真的能够提升空气质量，市民们意见不一。
参考译文：
Citizens do not agree on whether reducing car use can really improve air quality.
我的回答：
Citizens do not agree on whether restriction on movements will improve air quality.
评价：
agree on whether restriction on car usi
文化传统话题
中文：
对于加强在媒体平台上宣传传统能否吸引年轻人喜欢上传统文化，网民们意见不一。
参考译文：
Netizens do not agree on whether promoting traditional culture on media platforms can make young people become interested in it.
我的回答：
Netizens do not agree on whether more publicity about traditional culture will make young people interested in it.
评价：
nice
个人品质话题
中文：
对于赚到很多钱能否让人长时间地感到幸福，心理学家们意见不一。
参考译文：
Psychologists do not agree on whether earning a great deal of money can increase people’s happiness for long periods of time.
我的回答：
Psychologists do not agree on whether making more money help people get a long-term happiness.
评价：
注意主谓一致 making more money helps